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simunyaa
07-27-2003, 06:13 PM
even darker than the night surrounding us
the siluetts of your body
the summer's heat pretends
closeness to origin of life

when will we be home

feading of other fields
drinking of other waters
protected by other roofs
other skies over different worlds

whenever the darkness of your skin
meets the blackness of the night
moon enlightning the stars of your eyes
i remember the land on the edge of your being

wondeing where i belong




:love: :love:

1poetsought
07-27-2003, 06:54 PM
simunyaa, welcome. I love this beautiful poem of yours. Looking forward to reading you some more in the near future. Oh, and to insure that your readership grows be certain to comment on other poets work as well. Peace!

$$RICH$$
07-28-2003, 01:45 PM
very well pose love how u displayed this piece
surely look to read more of u soon
nice and tyte scribe

Bluewater
08-07-2003, 09:40 PM
wow
beautiful
lovely
wonderful flow
Peace

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