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MzNappi
05-05-2001, 01:06 PM
the kind of luv that happenz
like the buddin of spring flowerz
the kind of luv that makez hourz
turn n2 dayz
& yearz

& then their laughter
travelz down green pasturez
pickin blossomz
which r really the thoughtz
of their lifelong

sweet luv songz
sang by birdz
can only b heard
by lover’z earz

summer rain iz really
the chilly mornin dew
coverin their rollin bodiez
bathin baskin
& blessed by beauty

she’z got luv 4 him

piercin peacefully past hiz painz
of previouz love-lust scernarioz
thoze r of no issue
& stemz no questionz

she’z got luv 4 him

and he iz confused

N2urSoul
05-06-2001, 10:06 AM
I can relate to this piece...
And am diggin' the vibe you
have here. It's a shame when
you gotz luv for someone, and
they are confused and don't know
how to reciprocate that same love!

Thanks for sharing this!

Afridancr
05-23-2001, 06:04 PM
I'm vibin with N2...it's a sad and hurtin feelin when you've got love for someone and it's not reciprocated.

It's possible he was never shown love in his/her life, therefore has no concept on how to give back.

$$RICH$$
01-21-2005, 12:04 AM
awesome poetic love surely he will love it
tyte write

watzinaname
01-21-2005, 03:36 AM
High time that he realize the beauty that lies before him, wonderful write.

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