~For my heaven on earth~

Come with me to the loving places
Where sunshine can rest on our smiling faces
A place where time for us will stand still
Come with me angel
Please say that you will

Loving places
Grass covered spaces
Places picked by the stars up above
Perfect places for you and I
Where we go together
Where we make love

In less than an instant
Puff, we are there
Your hand in mine
So much in love
Without a care

Here amoung the familar mundane
Our love is stiffeled
**** such a waste
Only fulfilled in a loving place
A place for lovers
Seeking to be free
The only place it seems
For you and for me

BE

these heights
and climes
we reach
together
bending
eternity
exploring
forever

it happens
instantaneously
i look at you
you smile at me

the loving
began before
our birth
and found us
bound us
here on earth

we lived
we learned
we journeyed apart
ever growing
the yearning
inside
"one" heart

the drawing
the pulling
the gravity
of fate
of this
"one" destiny

and blessed
joy adorns
these faces
our souls
fulfilled
in
loving
places....


yeah :)

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thank you both for these loving places

:heart:

Destee

just awesomely sweet in da places of love

SMOOTHE RICH,JUST SMOOTHE....FLOW ON MY MAN

Very nice one to bring back Rich. Those loving places sound devine.

beautifull.....



yes visionised it....
beautifull....



what makes a poem beautifull and powerfull..


it is when there is a emotion behind it that is based on realness and truth and love (life)



i like youre work..keep writting poet...










loveauroraflower:heart: