...exposing my self to the masses

do you know that I still have your poem called "mass transit"?

pulling it back up

my favorite part was Act 3:

"chillin', holding
down my two spots
mindin' my business
when i saw her
chocolate foxy mocha
sexy sister I swear
she had "Hershey" stamped
on her hip
I said "hey what's your name"
she said "none of your
**** business"
(**** business?)
I said "okay maybe I missed
something. I'm sorry. what's
your name?"
she said "none of your business,
you too **** black and you
riding the bus"

now you see some can't recognize
an opening to "get it right"
or "set the record straight"
so I had to remix it so she
felt MY vibe...I told her

first of all
you need to turn on your
brain before your mouth
begins it day..yo' ***
might just scare a **** good brother
away and what do you mean
by riding the bus? you sittin'
right next to me miss overly
sadidy and what the (censored)
do you mean by "too black?"
that statement was wack so let's
get this right and exact...
can you "handle that?"
I am that black that holds
you when you turn off your
lights...the insides of your closed
eyelids when you pray
to GOD at night...
I am that black you see
that holds the stars
you wish upon..do I need to
"carryon?" so
while you color trip on this
brief let me give you a tip
try breath mints.

excuse me...this
is my stop.

oh yeah,
this is Mass Transit.

(c)2001 Blakverb"

still lmao :lol:

You're a nice looking brotha....Two thumbs up!

Poeticdelight,

you know i forgot about that piece. thank you for the memory. i'm surprised you still have it. man...

poetonthedl,

thanks

Happy to see da MAN behind da mighty pen
hey Brutha Verb

Blak is definitely Beautiful!


souldeep!
Coco :heart:

Blak sho nuff iz

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ummmmmm hummmmmm



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yes you are!!!! and i think i'm beginning to believe that Beautiful is an understatement!!!! ;)
~Kim~

is it that much drool??????:D

Nice pic Big Bruh - you might scare da white folks with
that one ! --
Naw, nice to see ya.

beautiful brutha but even more of a beautiful poet, nice picture :)

I ain't gonna slobber, I just wanna holla
BLAK... my man!

yes, you are definitely beautiful and on top of that....the poem that was posted after your pic that you forgot about was also beautiful...

now that I look again, you look like my cousin Ron from Mississippi, but he's not bright enough to get a pic on the web. Sorry Ron (aka BULA..isn't that something).

Ya pic was coo' but it was the poem that made me drool :)

Someone call 911...I think I'm gonna faint.

SEXY SEXY SEXY MAN!!!

wow brotha...beautiful picture...all I can do is repeat what has already been said..you are fine!!....

ummmmmmmmmmmmm :)... YUM YUM!!!!! :) :) :)

peace

oh yeah... tyte flow bro... ummmmmm :) :) :)

peace

:shades:brotha black:shades:

youre cool...

and i,m saying it with this raw man,s voice like that old man who say,s
be cool...... in that video of Tony Tony Tony(get down)...with the black hat on...lol

much love
liberty