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$$RICH$$

02-21-2003, 02:47 PM

Destructional maze
loom da united we stand
tears stain forever

LyrikalShe

03-11-2003, 02:47 PM

SPEAK!!! You lay it bare in so few words. I love this!!

Serenity...
She

$$RICH$$

03-12-2003, 02:18 AM

Thankz it's an honor to hear wordz of u that makes me smile

alter

03-15-2003, 05:37 PM

nice ... last line, 'specially.

$$RICH$$

03-15-2003, 06:48 PM

word up Thankz Alter

Royal_T

04-05-2003, 10:36 PM

Destructional maze
loom da united we stand ----$RICH$
tears stain forever

Dysfunctional faze
That we've learned to live with here-----Royal_T
My tears are so real.

It hurts me so deep
To watch my people live weak
Third eye is needed.

$$RICH$$

04-07-2003, 02:04 AM

da aftermath of
stone wash myth we stand alone
eye weep in dead blood

we watch it daily
third eye open wide now see
and hearts rumble fast

is it forever
or will it end soon right here
my mind in a maze.

PurpleMoons

05-06-2003, 01:53 AM

you're so talented.

$$RICH$$

05-06-2003, 02:43 AM

Thank u sista u tyte ya self
we help each other along

mkhaya lo'

05-17-2003, 07:27 AM

let the tears that leave stains be the proof that the people felt...hurt, cried and then did something about it..

lo'

$$RICH$$

05-17-2003, 03:23 PM

it's what we stand for
to show proof of the tears left
is our power torch

the cries of hurting
is the pain left untold still
the change is coming

$$RICH$$

06-07-2003, 08:23 PM

we so change by tyme
the love abyss by heart felt
no pain will do us

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