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ExquisiteBalla
01-10-2003, 03:15 AM
:jawdrop:
When my pen leaks
My mind speaks
Streaming words so unique
They captivate minds for weeks.
The aura I project and initiate
Makes negativity
Evaporate and disintegrate.
activating lyrics that deprecate
where hate originates.
Mental bliss is what I instigate
To anyone reading this
With a enough insight
To give a blind man
Spectacles of happiness.
So as the truth remains
Realizations proclaim
That from my stupendous brain
Not one idiom
Could be deemed inane.
The thoughts I elect to eject
The way they connect
fascinates minds
One line at a time
Lexis so sublime
They bring oohs and aahs
From mutes and mimes.
They way I construct
With my dialect
Makes me look like
A vernacular architect
Mentally captivating
When you’d least expect
With rhymes in shackles
Each and every word in check
Couldn’t find an error
Would you like to inspect?
I Mesmerize and hypnotize
With each and every
Word I exercise
Enthrall and entrance
Beyond your envisioned demands
Every heard of eye candy?
Well this is a sugar attack to you eyes.
I’ll never subside
That’s the black man’s demise
My vernacular mascots
Stupefy intellectual hotshots
Have then flabbergasted like robots
Circuits staggering in sheer shock.
The way my words reign
Stimulate and emancipate
Accelerate and invigorate
I leave negativity docile
Evil thoughts just evaporate.
So know when Ray comes in
Edifying Flabbergasting begins
I send geniuses run for pens
As they inhale my thoughts
Like the wind.
My Influence
Email Me (exquisiteballa@hotmail.com)
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$$RICH$$
01-10-2003, 11:36 AM
dat's what i'm talking bout
welcome wit such beautiful flow
welcome upon family u know
welcome to destee's place
write ya line flow let it go
welcome to dis place of luv
like joy touched from above
welcome welcome welcome!!!!!!!!:)
:wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

Sista Steele
01-17-2003, 06:47 PM
...a sugar attack to your eyes...

Your flows are extremely tight.

ExquisiteBalla
01-18-2003, 11:01 PM
Thank's Rich
through your words
your flow is high pitch
and Sista Steele
your lyrical might
definitely brings light.

ASHANTA
01-19-2003, 05:26 PM
My sister this is very well written and blessings to your pen.

Destee
01-19-2003, 06:34 PM
:wave: Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaay ExquisitesOne :wave:

~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

Thank you for joining us and sharing your flows !!

Please take a moment and read this thread (http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=11896).

Again, thanks a bunch and welcome !!

:heart:

Destee

ExquisiteBalla
01-19-2003, 08:22 PM
Thanks Ashanta
I'm feeling your style also
I'm a guy with a pen
That orchestrates the thoughts within.

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