alyce
04-19-2001, 09:30 AM
we fed each other
dreams & hopes
like
plump grapes
and let the
sweet juice
run down our
faces
happy to
share the
moments
when there
were no
worries
just our
grape
dreams
&hopes
but we left
a few outside
in the sun
~~~~~~~~~~
raisins
taste just
as
sweet
Alyce, 2001
and you never disappoint. I feel you. But I know it's so much deeper. You cause the mind to stretch. My head hurts, Alyce! (stop doing that!!!!!)
Much love for what you share,
CELA
N2urSoul
04-20-2001, 09:36 PM
...yet simple!
Bing, Bing, Bing...AWARENESS!!
Sista - you've got a "heavy" on your
shoulders! Standing Ovation...
Tyght prose for the SoulurN2~~
Thanks for this!!
Destee
04-23-2001, 02:55 AM
Alyce ... dear darling sweet Alyce!
you know the tartness in some grapes
that you taste before the sweetness settles in
well ...
my mouth is still watering
Awesome!
:heart:
Destee
wildflower7
06-06-2001, 04:39 PM
thank you!
this was so beautiful to read.
-7
$$RICH$$
11-20-2005, 04:21 AM
feed me some more
a tasteful delight Alyce........
Tantrum
11-20-2005, 05:26 AM
Sweet precise and beutiful
Wonderful piece poet
nevar
11-20-2005, 05:36 AM
this was a delightful piece flow on alyce.
watzinaname
11-20-2005, 10:27 AM
Some things ripen and get sweeter with time, fabulous write.