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I Need To Write

klabarron
12-16-2002, 05:10 PM
I need to write.
I need to write.
I need to write.
I need to write.

I need to write about daffodils and springtime thrills
About paisley prints and green rolling hills.
About a cool breeze on a hot summer's day.
About how high I am.... in a natural way.

I need to write.
I need to write.
About a faithful friend
About stickin’ with me through thick and thin
About the true depth of relationship
About commitment between two where one won’t dip
I need to write.

I need to write.
I need to write.
I need to write.
About days of hard work strugglin’.
Negated by nights of good girl lovin’
About this beautiful black diva I’m livin’ with.
About how she rocks my world and make my wig flip.

I need to write.
I need to write.
About pens and pads, and pads and pens.
About how tight scribes with words new worlds begin.
About stimulating your intellectual mind.
About simulating the back of your neck from behind.
About how you begin to shake and quiver.
About how I bring ecstasy - strong pen-strokes I deliver
About how your eyes roll back in your head.
About how those sweet legs spread cause this scribe is hot.
How you wiggle your tongue and think of that special spot.
How chest starts to flutter and your thoughts are shot.
Now you’re feelin’ the this scribe’s mental misogynistic plot.

To mentally stimulate you..

Thoughts infiltrate you…

Vibes titillate you…

Scribes saturate you…

Verses so inflate you…

‘Till we intimately find connectivity
And I gyrate mentally
And you pulsate intellectually
And we achieve a higher conscience
Just because I wrote it like that!
I need to write.

smallworld
12-16-2002, 10:01 PM
That was a hot flow and it moved thru many levels of emotion. I dig it, keep it up :wink:

$$RICH$$
12-17-2002, 01:15 AM
flow on dis was awesome ........moving on da path

SHAKA ZULU
12-17-2002, 01:19 AM
YO TAKING IT TO THE NEXT PHASE. THAT WAS STRAIGHT TO THE POINT.KEEP THOSE FLAMES BURNING.SHAKA ZULU.PEACE.

Monetary
12-17-2002, 01:49 AM
That was tight and off da hook.

The flow is on point and on full tilt.

Keep it coming. :toast:

Blkthunder
12-17-2002, 09:13 AM
Yes
Don't we all...
Liked the concept..

lpoet
12-17-2002, 07:00 PM
I need to write about daffodils and springtime thrills
About paisley prints and green rolling hills.
About a cool breeze on a hot summer's day.
About how high I am.... in a natural way.

wish i could write bout stuff like this

ill concept

and **** i done felt that way so many times

including today

nice drop

UL820
12-18-2002, 09:55 AM
don't know how I missed this, but NICE WRITE

LiLi
12-18-2002, 01:06 PM
how we never know what's going to appear on the page! nice peice!

FeLoNy
12-18-2002, 01:27 PM
I need to reply
I need to reply

ya flow was nice...700

MissPoetik
12-18-2002, 02:31 PM
About how tight scribes with words new worlds begin.
nice read... perfectly stated.

klabarron
12-20-2002, 12:24 PM
hey thanks for the love fam. you know we all have that drive in us to spit in ink, the intangible, the invisible, the soul's cry to be heard. let's all keep speaking poetic truth - till we die a death by our own poetic hand....

much love
klab.

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