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klabarron
11-08-2002, 05:47 PM
this is driving me out of my mind?
why is life so unfair?
why is it every man i meet either married,
only wants one thing or is looking for a man just like me?
why can’t i find someone to love?
i know i’m cute. i know i can cook.
and the lovin’, man i’ve got so much good lovin’
to give that its running out of my ears
and every other orifice i posses.
but these feelings? what do i do with them?
what do i do with a heart that is so full of love
that it is rotting, decaying; plagued by loneliness.
what do i do with the focus of my mind that is
bounced from sidewalk, to alley, to the brother at
the next desk over ‘cause it cannot isolate and
fixate on mr. right? where the hell is he?
what do i do with breasts that desire a touch
and hair that desires a tug and love that
desires love. yes! in all the right places.
what do i do with these feelings?
what do i do with my love?

elayne.
11-08-2002, 06:30 PM
mmm mmm mmm! you have written the heart of
many single... & not so single sistahs in this peace!
your insight is astounding... as if they have all
cried on your shoulders & you were indeed paying
attention.

thanks for sharing.

itsallLove, chile.

elayne.

klabarron
11-09-2002, 12:31 AM
much love sis. much love to ya!

$$RICH$$
11-09-2002, 01:25 AM
so many minds wonder
so many souls lone to have
inside every single & lonely female
these things they ask !
yet da truth told
yet their heart knoweth of sweet love
da minds wonder u captured da sadness
of every lonely woman who wonders

lpoet
11-09-2002, 11:28 AM
my favorite lines where
"what do i do with breasts that desire a touch
and hair that desires a tug and love that
desires love. "

and the end, when you said what do i do with this love

great work

Gaylee
11-09-2002, 06:59 PM
I real feel the intensity of this piece, probably because I do remember being there once upon a time. Let time and other pursuits, and strong friendships tyde you over and Mr. Right will find you. I fully agree with Elayne about your insight, it is excellent.

klabarron
11-11-2002, 06:37 PM
be blessed gaylee. and thanks for the poetic knod!!

MsBerry_98
11-11-2002, 10:19 PM
I see that you do HEAR us when we rant and rave and whine and complain. Thank you for verbalizing it.

Much :heart:

Twofish
11-12-2002, 12:48 AM
yes I know this feeling 4 sho

Peace and Love

2fish

klabarron
11-12-2002, 10:40 AM
MsB - Great to hear from you and know you are still out there.

Two - thanks for the read.

shaz
11-12-2002, 12:11 PM
well said poet

klabarron
11-12-2002, 03:21 PM
thx shaz - just tryin' to feel the sistas, ya know?

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