Venus - planet of passion
play on girl play on

venereal vibrations
sensations
gyrations
as your rhythm moves me
to your beat

Venus
controlled chaos
shattering my former
earthly existence
to the extent
that all i desire
it for you to spin me
off my axis

Venus
fill me with your beat
replete
i seek the crescendo
to the next note
of chaotic, erotic exchange
2/4, 3/4, 4/4
flips the beat
my soul complete
with you girl

Venus - planet of passion
play on girl play on

dance a dance
across my heart-strings
play me girl
play me girl
play me girl
pick me
flick me
make me by your hand

i squeal in c sharp
and you play me b flat
and the rhythmic melody
with vigorous vibrancy
viciously
you play
and you invade my space
continually
most sensually
and i am left
exhausted
love-spent
as you rip
shrill after shrill
run from top to bottom
and i am left
exhausted
love-spent
as you play me
as you please you

please Venus
play me again???


(scribed in unison with John Coltrane's Venus)

tight "classical" piece

i'm diggin it

:toast:

one

:)

thx pd

i have fallen in love... with this peace!!

i've read it like 4 times in a row already...
& all i can say each time is... "Dayum this
is soooo extratyght!" i wanna put in my
request rhat ni... to hear this one at the
next SpokenLive! so don't even front when
you come thru the door!! :lol:

(i think imma go listen to some Coltrane!)

itsallLove.

elayne.

for sure my sista! thanks so much for your support.