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klabarron
11-05-2002, 04:25 PM
This love thang is crazy!
So crazy I am about to loose my mind!
Crazy?
Crazy!

For the geometry
of love's psychology
lead me
to 1 + 1=3
for love + love = love2pain
for love is no game
this is serious ****.

the equation...

is often fliped
from me + you = we
to me + my = I
and selfless love
turns to selfish love
the taker takes
all the giver has
even the giver's self
at least the giver's love

the fraction...

tends to indicate
the love turns to hate
when i give 100% of my love
for 20% of your love cause
your lack of sharing you
with me
and taking parts of we
has left me pissed
to 100/5ths of the
highest level of pissivity!

so the subtraction...

becomes my goal
as i welcome a black hole
of loneliness
your former love nest
as i cancel your existance
and remove the 20% of you
from the 100% of we
and i am reduced to 100% me
for the we
is no more
you hit the door
and 1 + 1 = 2
for love + me = pain
loneliness
rejection
tears
sighs
and whys.

but addition...

tells me that this love lost
when added to my wounded soul
will teach me
how to see
another bad
love geometry
when it comes to me
and my 1 + 1 = 3
will remain 1 + discernment = free
and i'll do the math
that subtract your no counting ***
and 1 + 1 will = me.
free and in love with me.

DaFlavaFul
11-05-2002, 04:28 PM
Hell! K u got the equations down pat! nice scribin'!

klabarron
11-05-2002, 04:29 PM
thx poet

UbZoRbShUn
11-05-2002, 04:39 PM
that's what I'm talkin bout.........

klabarron
11-05-2002, 04:41 PM
shout it out zorb!!!! shout it out!

$$RICH$$
07-03-2004, 08:09 PM
dis what i call perfection !

watzinaname
07-04-2004, 08:49 AM
This all adds up to being a classic. Love don't love nobody, got to love self, and hopefully you'll know when true love comes into the equation. Geez, this was tight!

klabarron
08-05-2004, 05:11 PM
thanks sis!!! k

queentswana
08-06-2004, 11:30 AM
That's a awesome piece I must say and I really enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing this one with us.

$$RICH$$
08-06-2004, 03:13 PM
indeed had to hit dis one up again as i read it for the 10th time

cherryblossom
04-24-2009, 08:37 PM
This love thang is crazy!
So crazy I am about to loose my mind!
Crazy?
Crazy!

For the geometry
of love's psychology
lead me
to 1 + 1=3
for love + love = love2pain
for love is no game
this is serious ****.

the equation...

is often fliped
from me + you = we
to me + my = I
and selfless love
turns to selfish love
the taker takes
all the giver has
even the giver's self
at least the giver's love

the fraction...

tends to indicate
the love turns to hate
when i give 100% of my love
for 20% of your love cause
your lack of sharing you
with me
and taking parts of we
has left me pissed
to 100/5ths of the
highest level of pissivity!

so the subtraction...

becomes my goal
as i welcome a black hole
of loneliness
your former love nest
as i cancel your existance
and remove the 20% of you
from the 100% of we
and i am reduced to 100% me
for the we
is no more
you hit the door
and 1 + 1 = 2
for love + me = pain
loneliness
rejection
tears
sighs
and whys.

but addition...

tells me that this love lost
when added to my wounded soul
will teach me
how to see
another bad
love geometry
when it comes to me
and my 1 + 1 = 3
will remain 1 + discernment = free
and i'll do the math
that subtract your no counting ***
and 1 + 1 will = me.
free and in love with me.

With my ever-romantic self, I was hoping for a better ending! lol

But, your math in this was multi-layered! Looks like you had some Algebra, some Trig and some Calculus in here too! :em0100:

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