I gaze at the sun set
as my son rises
and the sun shines
between the ebony coasts of her thighs.

On a desert isle
of sheer passion
my ship wrecks
on the ebony coasts between her thigh.

so beautiful are these
coasts between her thighs
that I sigh so wantonly
at the sight of her desert isle

shipwreck is preferred
as she vocally beacons, i heard
my heartbeat rose into my throat
as i gazed upon her ebony coasts

so i traveled.

following a solitary voice
that calls me to once
to indulge my self in sea shores
her ebony coasts of sunshine
where she shines
upon a wearied sailor
who seeks to rest
upon her ebony coasts of ecstasy.

her isle called me to her coasts
sweet ebony coasts i visited
until my wearied state of wantonness
had be fully depleted
of all it’s vigor
and i rested upon
her ebony coasts.

mmmm... i loved the subtle hints of eroticism that
flowed throughout this peace... thank you for
sharing. :)

itsallLove, chile.

elayne.

subtle is good. alluring and enticing. thanks for feelin the brother.

"I gaze at the sun set
as my son rises
and the sun shines
between the ebony coasts of her thighs.

On a desert isle
of sheer passion
my ship wrecks
on the ebony coasts between her thigh."

i just so love the opening of this!! there is just something so serene and having that lighthouse right beside it really helped to take me there. this is a lovely peice.

**** very subtle indeed i loved this

even read it twice to make sure i caught everything

i would give you my favorite line but i love everything
about it

great work

Kla,

Really good flowin' here brotha!!!

:peace:
GQ

fam thx for the love.

a caged intimacy is beautiful... and exciting.