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klabarron
11-04-2002, 05:25 PM
I got a secret!
i got a secret!
but who is this over my shoulder
i'm creeping
i'm seeking
looking for my prey
the hunter hunteth
but the hounds are on my hills
my prey is running
but seems all eyes are on me.
who is that?
i turn and no one is there
and my pursuit resumes
i'm chasing her
in smooth verse
and sensual words
i chase her
in soft touches
and light ear nibbles
i chase her
in illusion
and techno-colored sensations
i chase her
who is that?
again i turn and see no one
and my conquest is completed
i get her!
romance her!
back-slam-bounce her!
for my pleasure
and it was good
who is that?
who tapped me on my shoulder?
who is that?
and from within
i realize it was...GOD!
i couldn't hide from His...
eye....???

GQ
11-05-2002, 07:22 PM
Kla,

Insightful piece!!!

:peace:
GQ

klabarron
11-05-2002, 11:53 PM
bro - you diggin' deep to find some pieces.

still holding down maxwell afb - klab

$$RICH$$
11-06-2002, 03:02 AM
indeed dis was a wide eye piece keep flowing!!!

klabarron
11-06-2002, 10:33 AM
thx rich-man!!!

shaz
11-06-2002, 10:37 AM
This is really good and had me speed reading to find out who it was.
Well done poet

klabarron
11-06-2002, 10:38 AM
peace shaz!!

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