I saw you from across the room,
Your eyes lifted me from my gloom and I was doomed.
Like that brown sugar pulsing through your veins,
irresistable,
yet deadly.
Entranced,
My mind danced,
danced to the beat of an unknown tune.
Like a breath, it became my own.

You transcended night and day,
The dawn of a new beginning,
Like a child's first breath,
A virgin's last moment,
My dreams began to speak,

Our lives unfold,
Dramas on hold,
Passions untold,

You asked me could I be the one,
Could I be the one fo fulfill your innermost desires,
Could I be the one to quench your heart's fires,
Could I be that one?

J. Rouse

P.S. You guys tell me what you think, an honest opinion. Just wanted to know if I should keep writing.

could i be the one?
the first one to touch ur spot
make u tremble make u hot?
much love and welcome to the spot! keep flowing!

AS i roam da sky
i welcome u to da house of destee's place
as u unwined for a good time to shine
and fulfill da desires and take da bliss a bit
higher that set things on fire as i welcome
u within upon family & friendz :toast:
:jumping: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :jumping:

:wave: Haaaaaaaaay JRouse :wave:

~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

~ Flow ~ Flow ~ Flow ~ Flow ~ Flow ~

Always and forever you should flow! :toast:

I'm going to copy this thread to the main Poetry Forum
so more Family Members can enjoy your "1st Time Post"
and welcome you too! :)

Thank you for joining us and please make yourself at home.

:heart:

Destee

WELCOME I LIKE YOUR FLOW CONTINUE TO SPEAK WHAT U KNOW ......